Plot Outline:The main character is a shy, and timid girl. She listens to whatever her friends and parents tell her to do. This shapes the plot, because she ends up succumbing to peer pressure, and almost drinks from the fountain of youth, to prove her city wrong, because her friend told her too.Cecilia (the protagonist) THINKS she finds the fountain of youth, but no one believes her. When she voices her ideas, and brings some water back for her country, they all start to drink it, and become immortal. She becomes the spotlight, but it is soon known that she has not drunken any. She goes through a long process trying to decide whether she should or not, but ends up deciding not too.1. List 5 Positive consequences and 5 Negative consequences?
Postitive:
No fear of dying of old age
One would be able to explore the whole world
One would be able to try dangerous activities without the fear of dying
One would be able to enjoy life without worrying about how much time they have to live.
One would also be able to bathe in the fountain of youth!
One's loved ones would not die off.
Negative: One's body would become very old
One's body would become diseased.
There would be a lot of overpopulation.
The world would run out of resources.
Because of the unavailability of resources, War would occur.
2. Describe your character. Complete these questions on your wiki. Create a page called "Character Development"
3. Describe the setting.
The setting is chaotic, and grimy. This story takes place in a futuristic North America, that has been destroyed by war.
4. What is the main conflict?
The main conflict is caused by the protaganist surcuming to peer pressure, and her inability to make his own decisions. The main conflict occurs when she drink from the fountain of youth.
What do you know about this character now that s/he doesn’t yet know?
I know that the character cannot thik for herself.
What is this character’s greatest flaw?
The fact that she listens to whatever her friends tell her.
What do you know about this character that s/he would never admit?
That she doesn't agree with the rules of her world, and has better ideas to create a better world for herself and her people.
What is this character’s greatest asset?
She is very smart!
If this character could choose a different identity, who would s/he be?
She would be a politician, or the president of her country.
What music does this character sing to when no one else is around?
She sings familiar folk songs, because they comfort her.
In what or whom does this character have the greatest faith?
In her strong-willed parents.
What is this character’s favorite movie?
She does not have access to a television.
Does this character have a favorite article of clothing? Favorite shoes?
The protaganist wears jeans, and a blue sweater throughout the day. Her favorite shoes are runners. She is not very self concious about her appearance.
Does this character have a vice? Name it.
Her family members.
Name this character’s favorite person (living or dead).
Her mother.
What is this character’s secret wish?
To become a fair ruler in her country.
What is this character’s proudest achievement?
At the moment, her proudest achievment is her marks in school.
Describe this character’s most embarrassing moment.
When she was caught stealing food rations.
What is this character’s deepest regret?
Her deepest regret was when she drank from the fountain of youth.
What is this character’s greatest fear?
spiders
Describe this character’s most devastating moment.
Her most devestating moment is when she drank from the fountain of youth
What is this character’s greatest achievement?
Her greatest acheivment is her marks in school.
What is this character’s greatest hope?
To become the ruler of her country.
Does this character have an obsession? Name it.
Poodles.
What is this character’s greatest disappointment?
The advice she recieves from her family members.
What is this character’s worst nightmare?
A war in her country, and her family being hurt.
Whom does this character most wish to please? Why?
Her country, becuase her country has the most influence in her world.
Describe this character’s mother.
persuasive, and competitive.
Describe this character’s father.
Laid back, understanding and hungry.
would this character prefer to live with?
Her best friend.
Where does this character fall in birth order? What effect does this have?
She is the youngest in her family. She is also the only girl.
Describe this character’s siblings or other close relatives.
She has two brothers, and three cousins. Her family members are all male!
Describe this character’s bedroom. Include three cherished items.
Her bedroom is small and plain. She has her marked assignments and report cards hanging on her wall, and pictures of her idols in her closet. She also has a seceret jar of money in her closet which she is using to save up for a plane ticket to Asia.
What is this character’s birth date? How does this character manifest traits of his/her astrological sign?
The protaganist was born on November 29th, 1996. She is a Saggitarius, and she is very calm, quiet and smart becuase of it!
If this character had to live in seclusion for six months, what six items would s/he bring?
She would bring books, a sleeping bag, and a peronal heater.
Why is this character angry?
Because her whole life has been controled by her country and her parents.
What calms this character?
Reading, and her best friend.
Describe a recurring dream or nightmare this character might have.
Dying alone.
List the circumstances over which this character has no control.
Her civilization's consumpation of the water from the Fountain of Youth.
What wakes this character in the middle of the night?
Her dog barking.
How would a stranger describe this character?
Quiet, boring, intelligent, with pretty hair.
What does this character resolve to do differently every morning?
To run for her municipal president.
Who depends on this character? Why?
Her best friend, and dog, because the protaganist is such a compassionate, helpful and dependable person.
If this character knew s/he had exactly one month to live, what would s/he do?
She would try and change the conditions for her civilization. She would also visit Asia!
How would a dear friend or relative describe this character?
Compassionate, reliable, thoughtful, and dependable.
What is this character’s most noticeable physical attribute?
Her long, black hair.
What is this character hiding from him/herself?
That she knows she could change the world
Write one additional thing about your character.
She can solve rubics cubes really fast!
Erin Skinnider- Short Story Rough Draft
I think I've found the Fountain of Youth. Until now, it has only been a myth in our society, but I think I have found it. I was walking alone in the woods, earlier today. I was alone, as usual, and looking for some plants to find. I then came across a beautiful lake, sparkling like diamonds even though the sky was grey, and the clouds hid the sun. I first suspected it was not an ordinary lake, when I saw swans, a bird that has been extinct for over 200 years! Swans and many other animals that used to portray peace became extinct in about 2050, after civilians attempted an uprising. Thousands were killed, and only 300 survived in North America. Ever since, our government has enforced very strict rules on our society, to ensure we never try anything like that again. I walked over to the lake, but jumped back, when I saw beautiful multi colored fish, swimming happily in this strange lake. I then remembered a lesson in school, long ago telling us how our government was unceasingly searching for a magical lake, or fountain, called the Fountain of Youth. This fountain was rumored to be somewhere near our district, and was discovered hundreds of years ago for the first time. As I was processing all this information, I realized that if I became responsible for presenting this discovery to my district officials, it would definitely increase my chances of fulfilling my one and only dream. Ever since I was a little girl, I've wanted to make a change in my world. Everything is so grim and unpleasant now days. Stories are told of times when one's comfort was the main priority of many people, to make money. the "money" that is rumored about does not exist anymore. Everyone is treated equally, to ensure no one attempts to rise beyond out government. Anyways, I've always wanted to become president! Be completely and utterly in charge. As I said before, when a democratic system was used in government, it just led to a power struggle, and ultimately an uprising, so all decisions are made entirely by my government. I jumped back up and started racing back towards my district, after I made this realization. I had never been happier in my life! When I got home, I wasn't surprised to see my mother yelling at my father and siblings. My mother expects much more from my siblings and myself than we can actually give her, and I know she knows it. I decided it wouldn't be the best time to tell her about my discovery, so I decided to head to my best friends house. Lindsay has been my best friend ever since I can remember. We met when we were young, and have stayed together ever since. I walked to her house, giddy with the realization of the effects of my new discovery. When I got to her house, Lindsay’s parents quickly informed me that Lindsay was too busy studying to talk to me. I felt a bit disappointed, but decided to go straight to our parliament buildings. When I got there, and announced what I had found, I wasn’t forced to wait 4-8 hours in the waiting room. I was quickly directed to the vice president’s office. When I entered his office and announced what I had discovered, he immediately hung up the phone, put his paperwork to the side and asked for more information. After I thoroughly explained my situation, we immediately embarked on a secret car trip to the forest. The car ride was tense with the excitement both of us felt. When we reached the lake, the vice president’s jaw dropped as he took in the full beauty of the lake. He immediately made many phone calls, and in less than 10 minutes, TV crews, giant machines and even the President were all staring in awe at this magical lake. 10 years later. 10 years ago, I found the Fountain of Youth. For some delusional reason, I assumed the discovery of the fountain would give our society more joy and happiness. I thought that the government would be more easy-going, and the rules would be less strict. Instead, it is the exact opposite. There is war, there are famines, and most of all, no one is safe. Because no one is dying, the population is increasing too fast, and supplies are running out. Due to the lack of supplies there are daily fights in the town square to get a hold of the last apple, or loaf of bread. People are being killed daily. After the initial shock of the Fountain of Youth was finished, people were rushing to get a taste of mortality. I haven’t drunken any of the water though. I haven’t told anyone, but after seeing the state of our society, I followed my gut, and threw my glass of water into some dirt. Now, every time I look outside I see a beautiful apple tree that stays alive throughout the year. I was entirely my fault. I wish I could of gone back 10 years and kept the secret of this beautiful lake to myself. Now, the lake is destroyed. The animals were all killed immediately, so they wouldn’t bring back the memories of 2000, and our society is more disruptive than before. I should of known something so magical would bring out such a disgusting aspect of human nature.
Postitive:
No fear of dying of old age
One would be able to explore the whole world
One would be able to try dangerous activities without the fear of dying
One would be able to enjoy life without worrying about how much time they have to live.
One would also be able to bathe in the fountain of youth!
One's loved ones would not die off.
Negative: One's body would become very old
One's body would become diseased.
There would be a lot of overpopulation.
The world would run out of resources.
Because of the unavailability of resources, War would occur.
2. Describe your character. Complete these questions on your wiki. Create a page called "Character Development"
3. Describe the setting.
The setting is chaotic, and grimy. This story takes place in a futuristic North America, that has been destroyed by war.
4. What is the main conflict?
The main conflict is caused by the protaganist surcuming to peer pressure, and her inability to make his own decisions. The main conflict occurs when she drink from the fountain of youth.
- What do you know about this character now that s/he doesn’t yet know?
I know that the character cannot thik for herself.- What is this character’s greatest flaw?
The fact that she listens to whatever her friends tell her.- What do you know about this character that s/he would never admit?
That she doesn't agree with the rules of her world, and has better ideas to create a better world for herself and her people.- What is this character’s greatest asset?
She is very smart!- If this character could choose a different identity, who would s/he be?
She would be a politician, or the president of her country.- What music does this character sing to when no one else is around?
She sings familiar folk songs, because they comfort her.- In what or whom does this character have the greatest faith?
In her strong-willed parents.- What is this character’s favorite movie?
She does not have access to a television.- Does this character have a favorite article of clothing? Favorite shoes?
The protaganist wears jeans, and a blue sweater throughout the day. Her favorite shoes are runners. She is not very self concious about her appearance.- Does this character have a vice? Name it.
Her family members.- Name this character’s favorite person (living or dead).
Her mother.- What is this character’s secret wish?
To become a fair ruler in her country.- What is this character’s proudest achievement?
At the moment, her proudest achievment is her marks in school.- Describe this character’s most embarrassing moment.
When she was caught stealing food rations.- What is this character’s deepest regret?
Her deepest regret was when she drank from the fountain of youth.- What is this character’s greatest fear?
spiders- Describe this character’s most devastating moment.
Her most devestating moment is when she drank from the fountain of youth- What is this character’s greatest achievement?
Her greatest acheivment is her marks in school.- What is this character’s greatest hope?
To become the ruler of her country.- Does this character have an obsession? Name it.
Poodles.- What is this character’s greatest disappointment?
The advice she recieves from her family members.- What is this character’s worst nightmare?
A war in her country, and her family being hurt.- Whom does this character most wish to please? Why?
Her country, becuase her country has the most influence in her world.- Describe this character’s mother.
persuasive, and competitive.- Describe this character’s father.
Laid back, understanding and hungry.- would this character prefer to live with?
Her best friend.- Where does this character fall in birth order? What effect does this have?
She is the youngest in her family. She is also the only girl.- Describe this character’s siblings or other close relatives.
She has two brothers, and three cousins. Her family members are all male!- Describe this character’s bedroom. Include three cherished items.
Her bedroom is small and plain. She has her marked assignments and report cards hanging on her wall, and pictures of her idols in her closet. She also has a seceret jar of money in her closet which she is using to save up for a plane ticket to Asia.- What is this character’s birth date? How does this character manifest traits of his/her astrological sign?
The protaganist was born on November 29th, 1996. She is a Saggitarius, and she is very calm, quiet and smart becuase of it!- If this character had to live in seclusion for six months, what six items would s/he bring?
She would bring books, a sleeping bag, and a peronal heater.- Why is this character angry?
Because her whole life has been controled by her country and her parents.- What calms this character?
Reading, and her best friend.- Describe a recurring dream or nightmare this character might have.
Dying alone.- List the circumstances over which this character has no control.
Her civilization's consumpation of the water from the Fountain of Youth.- What wakes this character in the middle of the night?
Her dog barking.- How would a stranger describe this character?
Quiet, boring, intelligent, with pretty hair.- What does this character resolve to do differently every morning?
To run for her municipal president.- Who depends on this character? Why?
Her best friend, and dog, because the protaganist is such a compassionate, helpful and dependable person.- If this character knew s/he had exactly one month to live, what would s/he do?
She would try and change the conditions for her civilization. She would also visit Asia!- How would a dear friend or relative describe this character?
Compassionate, reliable, thoughtful, and dependable.- What is this character’s most noticeable physical attribute?
Her long, black hair.- What is this character hiding from him/herself?
That she knows she could change the world- Write one additional thing about your character.
She can solve rubics cubes really fast!Erin Skinnider- Short Story Rough Draft
I think I've found the Fountain of Youth. Until now, it has only been a myth in our society, but I think I have found it. I was walking alone in the woods, earlier today. I was alone, as usual, and looking for some plants to find. I then came across a beautiful lake, sparkling like diamonds even though the sky was grey, and the clouds hid the sun. I first suspected it was not an ordinary lake, when I saw swans, a bird that has been extinct for over 200 years! Swans and many other animals that used to portray peace became extinct in about 2050, after civilians attempted an uprising. Thousands were killed, and only 300 survived in North America. Ever since, our government has enforced very strict rules on our society, to ensure we never try anything like that again. I walked over to the lake, but jumped back, when I saw beautiful multi colored fish, swimming happily in this strange lake. I then remembered a lesson in school, long ago telling us how our government was unceasingly searching for a magical lake, or fountain, called the Fountain of Youth. This fountain was rumored to be somewhere near our district, and was discovered hundreds of years ago for the first time. As I was processing all this information, I realized that if I became responsible for presenting this discovery to my district officials, it would definitely increase my chances of fulfilling my one and only dream. Ever since I was a little girl, I've wanted to make a change in my world. Everything is so grim and unpleasant now days. Stories are told of times when one's comfort was the main priority of many people, to make money. the "money" that is rumored about does not exist anymore. Everyone is treated equally, to ensure no one attempts to rise beyond out government. Anyways, I've always wanted to become president! Be completely and utterly in charge. As I said before, when a democratic system was used in government, it just led to a power struggle, and ultimately an uprising, so all decisions are made entirely by my government. I jumped back up and started racing back towards my district, after I made this realization. I had never been happier in my life!
When I got home, I wasn't surprised to see my mother yelling at my father and siblings. My mother expects much more from my siblings and myself than we can actually give her, and I know she knows it. I decided it wouldn't be the best time to tell her about my discovery, so I decided to head to my best friends house. Lindsay has been my best friend ever since I can remember. We met when we were young, and have stayed together ever since. I walked to her house, giddy with the realization of the effects of my new discovery. When I got to her house, Lindsay’s parents quickly informed me that Lindsay was too busy studying to talk to me. I felt a bit disappointed, but decided to go straight to our parliament buildings.
When I got there, and announced what I had found, I wasn’t forced to wait 4-8 hours in the waiting room. I was quickly directed to the vice president’s office. When I entered his office and announced what I had discovered, he immediately hung up the phone, put his paperwork to the side and asked for more information. After I thoroughly explained my situation, we immediately embarked on a secret car trip to the forest. The car ride was tense with the excitement both of us felt. When we reached the lake, the vice president’s jaw dropped as he took in the full beauty of the lake. He immediately made many phone calls, and in less than 10 minutes, TV crews, giant machines and even the President were all staring in awe at this magical lake.
10 years later.
10 years ago, I found the Fountain of Youth. For some delusional reason, I assumed the discovery of the fountain would give our society more joy and happiness. I thought that the government would be more easy-going, and the rules would be less strict. Instead, it is the exact opposite. There is war, there are famines, and most of all, no one is safe. Because no one is dying, the population is increasing too fast, and supplies are running out. Due to the lack of supplies there are daily fights in the town square to get a hold of the last apple, or loaf of bread. People are being killed daily. After the initial shock of the Fountain of Youth was finished, people were rushing to get a taste of mortality. I haven’t drunken any of the water though. I haven’t told anyone, but after seeing the state of our society, I followed my gut, and threw my glass of water into some dirt. Now, every time I look outside I see a beautiful apple tree that stays alive throughout the year.
I was entirely my fault. I wish I could of gone back 10 years and kept the secret of this beautiful lake to myself. Now, the lake is destroyed. The animals were all killed immediately, so they wouldn’t bring back the memories of 2000, and our society is more disruptive than before. I should of known something so magical would bring out such a disgusting aspect of human nature.